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I've just given up
Nothing seems to work on you anymore
I'm too jaded to move
Too faded to keep me from losing you
My care triggered your carelessness
And I don't know why I carry it on
I know you'll always be gone anyway
Your every move counters my emotion
as if you do it on purpose
All that I ever had for you
Never seemed to waiver the drawbacks you had.

Why did I even keep myself up just for you?
I never got the attention I craved.
It was hopeless
Just like you
I've given up
and I'm too jaded to move.

One day you played me through
But so used to it,
I didn't care anymore
I was only a back up
at first I didn't notice
your greed took control
all you wanted was attention, forever.
I never would have though I would
only be a piece of the back of your mind
I concluded you just needed time.

Has it really been 3 months?
Decide what to do
I'm too jaded to move
Until recently you were the only one
Gone, now you're just gone
I don't have to stress anymore/ I'm too
Jaded to move

Interception from your life is making mine even worse
From here on
I promise myself an echo in a cave
I remember when we actually cared.
Once again I miss you so
I don't think you'd know
The depth of what I say today
All of it must be true
Because I'm saying this to you.
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Author's Comments

This is a song thing I wrote about 4 years ago.
Now that I read it, I find that it could be a lot better. But I figure that I might as well post it as is... So I can think about how much I have improved.


I don't think I wrote this about any boy or girl in particular. So...enjoy

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:iconsilverlion:
Nicely written, a bit emo, but I've been there too.
:iconsephirothsix:
Painful with angst, I love the emotion. If you sung it for me I could come up with a wicked bass part Luna

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I'm a horrible singer...but let's do it.

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:iconperpetualwolfsage:
Emo indeed. I wrote them back in the day...

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